the doctor

[thedoctor]

ALL ABOUT YOU!

your name ooc: Nathan
your age: 18
experience: 4 Years
what do you hear?:

ALL ABOUT THEM!

character name: The Doctor, John Smith
canon: Doctor Who
canon point: Post-S5
important history: Ha! You want me to write it myself?

character age: 950 or something, I stopped counting.
face claim: Matt Smith
notable weaknesses:

• Humans..
  
• Always needing to help!
  
• Easily annoyed
  
• His companions
  
• Thinks aloud when stressed
  
• Can't hide emotion
  
• A Fez.
  
• Regeneration! I WANT TO BE GINGER!
  

notable strengths/abilities:

• Extreme Intelligence
  
• Amazing Memory
  
• Can pretty much do anything
  
• Being The Doctor!
  

general personality: My eleventh regeneration is quite alive and bubbly, always running around seemingly having fun. Kind of reckless as well which I've picked up over the years previously which makes me a flight risk sometimes but it gets the job done. I enjoy the company of my companions even when they annoy me endlessly sometimes wanting me to do EVERYTHING for them.

Sometimes I can be a bit rough on people, one mistake and its over your going home from where you came, sounds rough but I don't handle mistakes well. I'm pretty alien and find it hard to find my 'humanity' which my previous incarnation had no trouble with. I think I've said too much already! I must be off!


anything else important about your character: Google me! I'm famous!

PROVE IT!

Must refrain from.. thinking out.. loud, I think as I run around the TARDIS opening my mouth, AMY! Stop messing about down there and get up here! I've got too many buttons to mess around with and I could use four hands which I don't seem to have with this regeneration, I say taking a step back from the center console and then running around it again pulling levers and pressing buttons, spinning handles and inputing co-ordinates.

This was so much easier years ago when this wasn't do complicated and my companion wasn't lazy!, I think as I run towards the door of the TARDIS and spin around to look at Amy. Amy, welcome to the year 320102, hopefully this will be EXCITING!, I say as I lift a small red hat from the coat stand near the door. A fez, fez's are cool and exciting and a show of brilliance! I open the door and almost fall out into space. NO!! MY NOT ANOTHER FEZ!, I yell as I watch the small red hat float out into space, Something just isn't right here..

[ELPHIE.]

Hi there!

Your app is a start, however there is some trouble, espeically in your sample. It is in the first person, and we require all posting be done in the third person and past tense.

For example, you wrote;

Must refrain from.. thinking out.. loud, I think as I run around the TARDIS opening my mouth, AMY! Stop messing about down there and get up here! I've got too many buttons to mess around with and I could use four hands which I don't seem to have with this regeneration, I say taking a step back from the center console and then running around it again pulling levers and pressing buttons, spinning handles and inputing co-ordinates.

if modified it ought to be something like this:

Must refrain from.. thinking out.. loud. The Doctor thought to himself, as he ran around the TARDIS. Opening his mouth, he yelled, "AMY! Stop messing about down there and get up here! I've got too many buttons to mess around with and I could use four hands which I don't seem to have with this regeneration." Taking a step back from the center console, The Doctor then began running around it again, pulling levers and pressing buttons, spinning handles and inputing co-ordinates.

See the difference?

also, as to the 'what do you hear' bit, I suggest you read over the rules again a little more carefully, and if you would maybe add a bit more to his personality, as he is a very complex character, and though you have gotten a good start, elaborating a bit more will help us know that you know him.

Thanks!